Omg, it's beautiful! Her expression, omg all the cool things on this image, I'm really amazed with this art! Thank You so much for this art trade, I hope I'll finish my part soon, and You will like it!
First of all, I have to say I love how happy and colorful this is! > u < It just makes me happy to look at it~ The only piece of criticism I have is that I feel like you shaded her forearm the same way one would shade a round or spherical object, so it looks a tiny bit strange. But this is seriously a gorgeous drawing! The airbrush gradient and the lace around the edges are just too perfect~
*clears throat* Attempting criticism despite being a terrible artist myself startiiing... NOW!
Okay, first of all, I really like the coloring in this. I find crayon shading very hard (or maybe that's just me XD) and you seemed to have nailed it pretty well here! Gives off a good effect! Very good at mastering the pose too! However, I do see some tiny flaws unfortunately. Something about the head bothers me, it seems a bit too small... And the angle the foot is at is.. well.. a bit too sharp.
But nevertheless other than that and some slight proportional things here and there it is overall a very impressive picture! Well done! ;D
On a little constructive criticism, Her head seems a little too small in comparison to her body.. or her neck is too thick. Though her right arm is bending, I think you should still be able to see a smidgen of her right upper arm... As for the outstretched hand towards the viewer... I think it can be fixed if you shift the center line of the torso towards her right, This would make the outstretched arm more 'sensible' ( as the arm right now seems to be extending out and back, rather than forward) and would create a more dynamic look. Or making the left sleeve much more 'circular' and the left collar curve the same way (like " ""( "" " rather than "" l "" )
but other than that, I envy your choice in colors and how you applied them *0* . Especially how you used different colors (ie green and yellow) rather than (green, a darker green) to show highlights and shadow. Lastly, you applied pure white flawlessly ^^ I am sorry for the long comment, but I hope this helps
I'm gonna be totally honest. Her right hand should not be behind her shoulder. That would be very awkward and painful. Her right eye is higher than her left eye. Her left foot is bending forward and same with her toes. They shouldn't be; they probably should be bending backwards. Her whole left arm seems... off. I don't know how to explain it, but it does.
I otherwise love the picture, mainly because if I tried this pose, it would fail. Epicaly. Sorry this is really long, but I hope this helps!
I just wanted to say that your proportions are a bit off so it's a bit awkward for the eye. One of the things I can see that could be fixed is her left arm (our left) is very awkward. If you were to try doing that with your own arm it would be painful or you just wouldn't be able to do it. I think if her arm were to be in a position similar to that the tips of the fingers as you have them now would come to the top of where the breast starts and would be positioned differently, like, her fingers would go down at a sort of diagonal slant.
And for the right arm (our right) if you were to make the sleeve look like the opening was facing us a bit, it wouldn't look like her arm was, well, a bit boxy. I'm sorry, I'm not so good at explaining things. I also seen that someone said that the head was out of proportion but I really think it's just because you didn't do considerable large hair like most do. I don't really think it's an issue.
Anyways, over all I think you did really well. The I really like the torso, it's really pleasing to the eye. I also really like how the skirt of the dress flows~
I'm sorry this is so long, and thank you for reading it if you did. I hope it helped. >///<
I really like the colors you've used and the background decorations. The anatomy could be improved a little bit, though. The body is great, the only issues I see are the arms and the head. The proportions bother me for some reason. But I know it's a tricky pose and angle so it's still an amazing work overall~
Somehow whenever I see a pic of you in my inbox I love the colors and the general look of the picture what motivates me to take a closer look. And like all the times before I'm fascinated by your work. The pose must have been complicated, especially the perspective-stuff with her hand and arm but it looks really great! I love the way her hair is flying around. And the coloring is amazing as always!